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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I'm one of your FF.N readers. ^__^ Thank God you found another place to post this, I would have died if I couldn't finish reading it. I absolutely LOVE this fic!! It's unbelievable. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now! ^__^ They better be able to find a way to reverse that spell!! Great job!
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Athravan.
I'm sorry about that whole thing with Fanfiction.net, I read your story, nothing goes beyond R rated. The story I'm soon to be starting is going to have more dark content and more profanity then this, and it won't go past R rated. Well, anyways, back to your story and my praising.
I really like your story so far. You write well with practically no grammer errors. There are far too many writers in the world that have "kill me now" grammer. Your writing is good, and the plot is interesting. Your character development is quite nice as well. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely
Jade
I'm sorry about that whole thing with Fanfiction.net, I read your story, nothing goes beyond R rated. The story I'm soon to be starting is going to have more dark content and more profanity then this, and it won't go past R rated. Well, anyways, back to your story and my praising.
I really like your story so far. You write well with practically no grammer errors. There are far too many writers in the world that have "kill me now" grammer. Your writing is good, and the plot is interesting. Your character development is quite nice as well. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely
Jade
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAAAH~!! Don't tell me I have to wait as long for ch. 5 as I did for 4! urveurve this fic, it's one of the best Sora & Riku fics out there and it's got Uke!Riku to boot. ^_^
Hrrmmm...maybe I can bug Tsaiko and Miome neechan into finding out some way I can bribe you into getting this fic done quicker. ^^;; <-- screaming KH SoraxRiku fangirl who can't find nearly enough well written fics to feed her addiction.
Hrrmmm...maybe I can bug Tsaiko and Miome neechan into finding out some way I can bribe you into getting this fic done quicker. ^^;; <-- screaming KH SoraxRiku fangirl who can't find nearly enough well written fics to feed her addiction.
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::Shakes her fist:: you musn't stop here! navar! oh thi story is riviting! (oh, its 4 am forgive my spelling/grammer errors) ooh sugah-sensei! write more for your loving drooling worshiping fans! ::worships::
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a incredible story!!! it's already 3AM and I can't stop reading!
I like where the story is leading and hopes Sora will save RIku. I'm now reading
chapter two and can't wait until I read the last. You are certainly ddoing a good job ^_^
Keep them going ^_^
I like where the story is leading and hopes Sora will save RIku. I'm now reading
chapter two and can't wait until I read the last. You are certainly ddoing a good job ^_^
Keep them going ^_^