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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. I love this so much, I gasped as I read this, such twists in the plot, the suspense, the excitment as I read this...I couldn't take my eyes off of this story. You truly deserve your place in thn. Tn. This story is just pure exellence, no no, something much more, much better. Your story is such an inspiration to keep me going on my own little KH fanfic. ^_^ It's so wonderful I can't really explain it, it defintely leave a big smile on my face. Someone with your talents in wriitng, you deserve much praise.
Please, you muct make an epilouge to this. I am eagerly awaiting, this is something that keep me on my toes.
Please, you muct make an epilouge to this. I am eagerly awaiting, this is something that keep me on my toes.
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post the epilouge before I pass out from holding my breath. The end of the last chapter made me cry, you meanie!!!!! But I will instantly forgive you as soon as you post the epilouge WITH A HAPPY ENDING (HINT HINT). I've really enjoyed your story. The writing style is enjoyable so keep it up.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH! Not finished x_x You must write more! I demand it! Oh, and I noticed a couple of typos and grammer errors but I can't seem to recall what they were. o_O;;
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, here it goes--this is the first review i've made in this place and i figured you deserved it. there aren't many KH fics out there and the ones that do exist suck. -_-0 but yours... is wonderful. very well written, no mistakes (except for the occational misspelling that comes with writing such lovely long chapters), the story is great and, even though i wouldn't picture Riku as uke... you did a wonderful job portraying their relationship and the situations in their use. this is by far, the best KH fic i have ever read. i hope you post the last chapter soon, i'll be waiting impatiently and longingly! =^_~=
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah! What is going to happen! WHAT I SAY!?!?! Oh...this is very well written and addictive...more...more I say!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not...fair...just not...fair.
That chapter was...perfect. Really. I mean, I've been reading fics for a while now, and writing them as well, but number five in your story went beyond my expectations. And it made your story the first fanfiction that caused me to cry (and my mom, too. How does that feel, being capable of makinga 48 year-old woman cry?). But, besides all thyouryour prose is just awesome, especially for this chapter. Everything that happened to the characters I understood and sympathized with and could totally 'see' in my mind. People say my ing\ing's good, but yours just grabs me and refuses to let go. Waiting for the epilogue is getting more and more difficult, as is trying to figure out how everything's going to be 'fixed'. I mean, how can all the wrongs be made to right, especially the relationship between Riku, Sora, and Kairi. I'm a fan of Kairi myself, but I can see how she would react to this, at least in relation to your story.
Even so, I want more than anything to see Riku and Sora together again, with Sora being Sora and Riku just being Riku again. I hope that is how it all turns out in the end, but I can never really be sure. I mean, the whole situation between the two seems so fragile that the merest little tremor can shatter it somehow.
You really, REALLY need to finish this and as soon as possible. Checking the dates, this fic hasn't been updated in about two weeks, so I'm kinda worried. However, I WILL keep coming back, if only because I can't seem to do anything else. ^_~
~*R-chan*~
That chapter was...perfect. Really. I mean, I've been reading fics for a while now, and writing them as well, but number five in your story went beyond my expectations. And it made your story the first fanfiction that caused me to cry (and my mom, too. How does that feel, being capable of makinga 48 year-old woman cry?). But, besides all thyouryour prose is just awesome, especially for this chapter. Everything that happened to the characters I understood and sympathized with and could totally 'see' in my mind. People say my ing\ing's good, but yours just grabs me and refuses to let go. Waiting for the epilogue is getting more and more difficult, as is trying to figure out how everything's going to be 'fixed'. I mean, how can all the wrongs be made to right, especially the relationship between Riku, Sora, and Kairi. I'm a fan of Kairi myself, but I can see how she would react to this, at least in relation to your story.
Even so, I want more than anything to see Riku and Sora together again, with Sora being Sora and Riku just being Riku again. I hope that is how it all turns out in the end, but I can never really be sure. I mean, the whole situation between the two seems so fragile that the merest little tremor can shatter it somehow.
You really, REALLY need to finish this and as soon as possible. Checking the dates, this fic hasn't been updated in about two weeks, so I'm kinda worried. However, I WILL keep coming back, if only because I can't seem to do anything else. ^_~
~*R-chan*~
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the greatest Kingdom Hearts fic EVER. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. I BEG YOU. I almost died waiting for chapter five!
i love the way riku isn't completely dominating and emotionless like he is in other fics i've read. and i like the way sora is smarter and not so submissive. and the dialog is amazing. there is a lot of feeling in it.
i love the way riku isn't completely dominating and emotionless like he is in other fics i've read. and i like the way sora is smarter and not so submissive. and the dialog is amazing. there is a lot of feeling in it.
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story I loved all five chapters so can u email me when u get the next chapter up! please!!!
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Oh ya I go by the name of Mess but my real name is Melissa
Cya ya
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Oh ya I go by the name of Mess but my real name is Melissa
Cya ya
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I used to read this on Fanfiction.net but then you never updated ago, then I found thid this site and found your ficcie!! I was soooo happy!! This is really good and poor Riku and Sora!!! Kairi doesn't understand! Please update as soon as possible! I love this ficcie and used to wish that you would update it when I didn'tw yow you had moved it to AdultFanFiction.net... Thankies! *glomp* chu~ -Yue
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sugah u r evil...leaving it right there *pout* its not fair first i beat the game only to find one of my sister's friends killed it and i cant watch the movie after the credits then you leave it right there *crys* T.T why is fate so mean to poor Zumi-chan?