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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a very good writer... so, anyone "rushing" a fanfic is okay. I do it too. It's kinda like, off the top of my head. A rough draft, if you will. I think Eike is cool, and Homunculus just gives me the heeby-jeebees, but I like him too. They're both cute. ^__^ I'm glad to see someone else writing about Eike and Homunculus. ^^ Yay!!!!! Write more on them, I demand it. >3
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! That's a really cool fic.Well it's not his will to be so gourgeous on so beautiful.hehehehe.I can't wait for the next chapter come on the excitement is killing me.pls continue i'm dying because of the suspence plsplsplsplsplsplspls continue- Sorry for acting like a kid alright Peace Out. And may u live longer.
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow,different.could you please continue?
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As one authoress to another, I believe this fic could have a lot of potential. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but when reading through this chapter, it feels very rushed. The idea you present is interesting, but I think the final product degrades that.
I think that in that state, you do not portray Eike's motivation, his reasoning for summoning Homunculus, very well. It appears sketchy, and a bit contradictory in places.
I don't think that the higher rated fiction suits this pairing, although if the storyline calls for it, and it is written well, exceptions can be made. I am not against higher-rated fiction by any means; I do read a good amount of NC-17 fiction, although I do not write it.
Of course, you do not have to take my advice, and I will not enforce it upon you. But should you consider rewriting this part; I can give you the URL of a forum where I know of a few SoD fans who would be willing to assist you in beta-reg.
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~ Shido
I think that in that state, you do not portray Eike's motivation, his reasoning for summoning Homunculus, very well. It appears sketchy, and a bit contradictory in places.
I don't think that the higher rated fiction suits this pairing, although if the storyline calls for it, and it is written well, exceptions can be made. I am not against higher-rated fiction by any means; I do read a good amount of NC-17 fiction, although I do not write it.
Of course, you do not have to take my advice, and I will not enforce it upon you. But should you consider rewriting this part; I can give you the URL of a forum where I know of a few SoD fans who would be willing to assist you in beta-reg.
g.
~ Shido
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's so wonderful to see that someone besides me likes Shadow of Destiny! Homunculus is so cute! But I must wonder about the physical aspect of their relationship. Isn't Homunculus an it? Just a thought... I'd love it if you wrote more! I've never been able to find Eike/Homunculus fanfiction before! *squeals with delight*