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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nenene pls do reply i'm dying to knoe what happens next. I've been waiting 4 almost two years. So pls do I'm anxious sorry about forcing u. bye
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u must go on!!! very good u must complete....me like very much... Bye bye
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has alot of potential, it is just a little hasty is all. I like where this is going, but to me it simply deems rated 'R'. I originally read this under fanfiction.net (my name: makai goddess ookami) and think you *could* post the whole thing under 'R'. 'course you should put a rape warning on it. =P I personally think you should do a sequel, as it would be awsome, and if you need a beta-reader I'm open =P (no offense if you already have one.)
Bring on the Homunculus Eike slash! there is to little of it! *waves a banner*
Dara, Efreet of the Red Stone
Bring on the Homunculus Eike slash! there is to little of it! *waves a banner*
Dara, Efreet of the Red Stone
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fanfiction there, since I am playing the game at the moment. I was realy suprised to see this section for S.O.M on here, to be honest. I don't understand who the story is told by though. CAN YOU PLEASE TELL ME IN A REVIEW TO ONE OF MY FICS SOMETIME, CAUSE MY E-MAIL ISN'T WORKING AT THE MOMENT.
Good nevertheless... Keep it up, and BE MORE CLEARER ON WHOS ING ING THE STORY! ^_^
Love Rei
XXX
Good nevertheless... Keep it up, and BE MORE CLEARER ON WHOS ING ING THE STORY! ^_^
Love Rei
XXX
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You muct continue. If only for my sake. ^^;
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooohhhh sooo hentai, soooo goood yesssss
it's strange to see homunculus in the submisive positionmoremore expected eike but it's good to make it different.^_^
it's strange to see homunculus in the submisive positionmoremore expected eike but it's good to make it different.^_^
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a SoD fic! I really hope you'll finish it, giving us more of an idea of what happened to make Eike lose his emotions besides lust. Poor Hom... bet that'll keep him exceptionally angry. But perhaps he's the only one who'll be able to help Eike lose that "evil-ness"? Hoping to see more soon!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh pls do continue i'm too excited to wait i want 2 see the next chapter.Poor Homunculus. that's gotta hurt.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Egads, this is great!! This is the first story I've seen for that game, and its about time someone wrote one. ^___^ Plz continue. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz xxx
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. You must continue. If you're waiting for more reveiws, don't expect many. Shadow of Destiny is too small a genre as it is, and I have only discovered the awsomness of it recently. Great fic though. A few spelling mistakes, but what is a fanfic without a little error?