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Did no one tell you to finish this? I want you to update, finish. Write hot sex scene, maybe some fanart. I don't care but I need something more, something extra.

HOW MANY MORE OF MY REVIEWS DO U NEED!? UR A HORRIBLE TEASE! :;sniff:: I hate u! Ok, no i dont. Update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease please please

YES! UPDATE PLEASE. GREAT FIC

Please continue! The story is great so far!

OMG YES! Please continue! I just rented this game lastnight and loved it! Homonculus and Eike are so hot!....I'm not sure if their are a lot of ppl who know of it so i hope u will continue even if u dont get a lot of reviews.

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! XDDDD

Oh please!!! You need to... UPDATE OMG!!! !PLEASE!!! ^___^ I loved it. It made me go squee giggle giggle!
Okay?! UPDATE!!!

Ok, as much as this fic amuses me I feel I must make some constructive critizism, from one author to annother. Ok, fisrst, I hate to say it, but pic one POV and stick with it. I dont mind going back and forth, but every paragraph is a little much. Also, I love yaoi and such and LOVE this pairring, considering my love of hermys, but it seems as though there was nothing but to go right to the sex with hardly an explanation. I like PWPs as much as the next person, but means no plot, not no sign of a back story. Also, I love this concept of Eike enslaving Homuculus, but I highly dought hes got the grapes so to speak. Eike is so pussywhipped. Anyways, I DO like this fic, but I just had to get that said. Best of luck!

i like it... there should be more of it.. this is good so far

It would be nice if you continue;obsession of Eike and the anger of the Djinn goes over...And something sensual becames to build.Like the idea?Please keep writing...