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O.O I never expected Albert to do THAT! What a twist of roles! That was frightening and so very very good. Good job once again, Athena!!

*melts into a giant puddle* I really loved the last line... Very cute. Perhaps it wasn't supposed to be cute, but I found it cute. I'm a strange individual, though. But I digress.

Sorry to pester you into updating! ^^;; It's soooo good, though... Some parts confuzzled me, however. Cripes... I need a new vocabulary... And some sleep, too. Notice how I can't make sentences. Ummm... so, yeah. Can't wait to find out what happens next and all that jazz. ^^;;; *huggles to bits* You're the best.

My, my! Very nice! I first read the chapter on ff.net and sought it out here. Veeery interesting. I would like to see more. :)

Athena, this fic is going really great. I'm looking forward to reading more of it and finding out what happens to Albert. Continue the great work!

Still love, admire, envy...

I'm extremely glad you've kept it up, you're absolutely right, they deserve a multi-chapter fic. And a good one, at that.

^_^ Lovelovelove it! I think this is my new favorite pair; Viktor and Flik are lacking in Sui3 (My only regret), and I haven't found anyone worthy of Hugo's Angsty Teen ast...But But this is lovely enough to make up for it. I must confess to a slight weakness for the occasional bit of non-con, and this fulfils the urge while also giving me a lovely dose of PLOT. Prism is a happy girl.

Don't worry aboour our lemon writing, either. I printed the current six chapters to read durring lunch at work, but after flipping through, realized it was too steamy to risk someone peaking over my shoulder or riffling through my papers.

^_^ Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter...I wanna see more Albert-mollestation...or plot...So hard to decide which is better...Both at once would make Prism a VERY happy girl ::bounces:: Please update soon!?

You aren't pathetic at writing sex! *huggles* That was great! I'm so happy you updated, and I really can't wait for the next one. This is extremely interesting. Although I might be biased, since Yuber/Albert is unbelievably hawt...

*writhes and hates some more*

I'm not serious. You are the greatest. Although I think Yuber should've raped the daylights out of him. Yes, I am sicut yut you knew that. ;D Thank you SOOO much for updating! You have made my day! And it's been a bad day so far, too. :) *huggles*

I'm quite impressed, I must say. It is rare that someone can capture the characters of both Yuber and Albert and keep them relatively in the span of their characters. Good work. I found little wrong with the spelling or the grammer too. I usually never say this to any writer, mostly because it makes me feel like a cheap reviewer, however, for you I'll make an exception: Update. It was enjoyable, and I am interested to see where your plot goes.

Oh Athena, I'm so glad you finally posted the next chapter. I swear this is one of my alltime favorite stories. Please post the next chapter soon. And keep up the marvelous work. ^.^