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sweet. =)

Dear me, you are going to finish this, aren't you? This is one of the very few Yuber/Albert fics that doesn't annoy me. The story is very, very good. Smutty, yes, but there is a reason for the smut. That's the best kind there is! ^_^ Anyway, You deserve praise, and here it is.

-glomps- YATTA! I love this ficcy^_^! -has been waiting for it to be updated tho-:( lol, I guess my best bet is to hunker down here and wait cuz Budehuc library doesn't even have chappy six! ummm..-thinkerz- I love how you've portrayed Yuber-sama!! and poor Albert-san! Write more! cuz if you don't!....j/k^_^ Again good fic! Bai!

Very impressive. I really love your style. It's very witty and your plot was inventive. The two main characters were fleshed out nicely, though I could never see Albert so submissive.

I read the all of it even though I don't enjoy yaoi, so that's saying something.

The only problem I had was in chapter six which was a line of thought from Albert

" Was that other time rape? Is it rape if you give your consent. . .?"

I find that rather off, coming from a intellectual man. Otherwise, kudos to you.

I agree with It\ It's about time. But seriously, loved the chapter and the Yuber feeling guilty. That was awesome. As usual you did an awesome job and I look forward to more!!

BWAHA. I've been waiting 8 chapters for Yuber to call him Albert. Brief fangirlish outburst there, but I couldn't help it.

It's about time. *grumbles* ay, ay, I like it bunches. I like Yuber's inner turmoil or what have you with regards to Albert. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Excuse me for a moment while I hyperventilate from over joy. *takes a moment to walk away and scream like a psychic fangirl before returning*



I'm ine wie with you. o.o Have my babies? xD Sorry. *ehem* As I was saying... That was very well written, I read it all the way though, couldn't stop myself even when my head was about to fall on the keyboard from lack of sleep. I love the way you did the first and second chapters, how the lemon was done in memory instead of realtime on the spot sort of thing. It's hard to find people who are willing to do role switches as well, and it thrilled me to death to see you do that at the very end. Yuber getting fucked has to be the most enthralling thing ever. o.o I liked this fic so much that I'm adding it to my recommended reading list thinger. *nods and glomps wildly*

Well, now that I have my own penname here, thought I'd drop a line and reiterate how much I'm enjoying this story. You know how much I enjoyed the Albert-torture in this chapter. We can both be so cruel to him. *grins* Anyway, Athena, this is simply marvelous and I can't wait to read more. ^u^

!! Albert/Yuber !! Albert/Yuber !! Albert/Yuber !! Kinda !! Even though TECHNICALLY it's not really ... /him,/ I'm still steadfast in my belief that they're reversable, and am quite happy to see Albert taking control. Even though its ... not really by his own decision. But you get the idea. If you can't tell, I liked it. Write more.