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for Luka's Story

by Ditmag

schedule June 25, 2021 at 12:00 AM

For the most part the way the fights are written are just fine, as most of the fights in MGQ are short anyways.  The only fights you actually draw out are the longer fights which fits the style.  Regarding the next-doll fights you could always just show the fight from their PoV.  No need to worry in that aspect.

schedule June 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This story is good.  Damn good even.  The kind of good that makes you think, Did the creator of MGQ just make an AFF account for his own game?

 

I hope this story continues.  Have you considerred putting this story onto fanfiction.net and Ao3 as well to get more exposure?