Since this is a Hellfire Club, would it be too much to have a cosplay day where they do elements of the X-Men version? Complete with Lara Croft as Jean Grey in the comics version, and having to dye her hair red for a while? That could also serve to strip-mine away part of her identity, too.
I do like where this is going, and I agree with the suggestions in the other review about the sex with students factor.
Another thing that might work, given that Lera is married to a woman now, is having her participate in a lesbian gangbang of people punishing her for 'cheating' on her wife, which is of course made extra ironic by every single one of the women doing this being married themselves. :P And if Lara dares to point out that hypocrisy, she gets an extra anal train each time she does. All of this in turn is geared at teaching her to obey orders, no matter how hypocritical.
Thank you for the new chapter, it was fun. Finally something after such a long time.
About my idea with students.
Lara could teach sex in a classroom in an office sexy suit. I liked your previous story of splitting sex lessons for making love with a princess and hard sex with a slut.
I think it would be fun if students were obsessed with Lara Croft, she would be their masturbation fantasy, and now their fantasy would come true.
I would like Lara to dominate over the students. I think if Lara tells one of the students it is time try anal sex, he would cum before he did it. Lara would have enjoyed teaching the students and would not feel like a slave.
I think it could be an interesting test with glory-hole. The student would have the task of knowing which hole Lary Croft fucks. The student behind the wall should have the task of identifying which hole of Lara Croft is using. The other students in their desks would have to watch everything quietly. Also, Lara could test students for how long they would endure handjob, assjob, breastjob, oral, anal, pussy sex, DP, DAP and more. For example, if a student endure five minutes of intensive handjob (of course Lara's hottest photos would be projected on the data projector), he can choose from clothes that Lara immediately wears and what sexual practices he will use to reach orgasm with her. It could be two parts. First sex teaching and second testing their sexual performance a few days later.
Really enjoyed chap 8, the horse sex was great. Medial rings!
Not so happy with Sarah getting dommed and don't really want to see Lara as a sex worker but hopefully whatever happens will be well written. Lara should spend more time with animals. I also want to read Sarah really owning her and making her an obedient wife.
Thank you for the gloryhole chapter but I'm a little disappointed. I was expecting more than just oral sex. However, the tattoo with the Croft emblem and lettering is great, the red dress is also very attractive. I liked part of the story where Lara exchanged sexual service for confidentiality in a tattoo parlor. I liked most the chapter 6. From the proposal for future chapters story is not too much interesting or attractive (for me). I wish some story twist. And also the chapter where Lara is at the university, conceals her sexual sins, sexually tease young students with her hot outfits and more. I don't feel her very attractive when she is just degraded. But it is just my opinion.
I vote for option 2 with Sybil accompanying Lara to record her "adventures" and publish them on members only website. This way Lara can earn some money and reimburse Natla for this lovely trip. After all Natla supposed to be Lara enemy, she can't be founding all her entertainment.
chap7, well written though glory-holes not my thing. As far as optional paths, I like both aside from the `old enemies tour', that bit seems silly and risky. Looking forward to Sarah fully in charge with more fisting. Maybe it will be Sarah who hits upon horses to break Lara (ah the irony of her being `broken' by horses). Well, looking forward to more naughty fun.
Chap 6, mostly good, glad Winston is getting into it, the party went on too long. Regarding Sarah, I want her to love Lara but be willing to do whatever it takes to keep her, so she has to go along with domming her in order to keep her. Again, I never want Lara to escape being a slave, but I would like her to end up happy with Sarah. And the horses.
That's my two cents. Good story.
I vote for the public option, not least because it puts Sarah on the horns of her own dilemma and would challenge her as well. Sarah would probably at least try to treat Lara more nicely than Natla would want, and what would Natla do there? It would play into the Stockholm angle in that it sets up Sarah to be the lesser evil to Lara and Natla indisputably the greater one.
Very nice chapter, the best for me so far. Lara and her collecting signatures through dinner worked very well. It is a pity that men did not seize the opportunity for more perverted sexual practices with her. I can't believe they'll just need oral service when Lara Croft is defeated. I mean some breastjob, deepthroat, assjob, bondage, slapping, dancing with horse tail buttplug, ass to mouth and more. Of course there was little time for these perverted practices. The chapter as a whole worked very well and I enjoyed it. I wish more action outside the manor and a more detailed description of how Lara was in demand but unbeatable and invincible for such men. Then the effect of filling the perverted fantasies of those men could work more. I think it would be good for the reader to describe more what they feel when is Lara finally humiliated. And still I wish a scene with a gloryhole. But please no longer sex with personal staff (Zip, Alister and others), it doesn't work for me now. It was too much. How about a mission where Lara has to make one of her former rivals a bitch for the evening. I mean Pierre or Larson. They may not be dead in this fanfiction universe.
Great chapter. Kudos on fixing plot holes certain annoying individual pointed out.
Dinner party was amazing. It had everything - guests and servants disdainful comments and reactions, Lara whoring herself for job, and even new tattoo idea. Definitely better than generic glory hole scene.
Building upon your 2nd idea Natla could send both girls to take slave/mistress training. It could be some remote property in the country. There you could have Lara undergo ponygirl training coupled with horse fucking others requested.
Sarah doesn't have to be evil. She could just be pragmatic. During their talk Natla would point out that without blackmail she would lose her (forced) lesbian lover, her new wardrobe, jewelry and unlimited access to Lara's fortune. But if she agree to cooperate she would keep everything. Teens feel in and out of love all the time, but diamonds are forever.
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