Enjoyed the story but my chief complaint are spelling errors that draw you out of the moment. I think a couple of proofreads would be worthwhile.
You're doing a good job with the kinks, keep it up
Anthros, futas, anthro futas, incest, and knowing that the futa mom is a sexy anthro Rhyhorn? Where has this been all my life?
OK, glad to see that you'll keep working on this one :)
I'll admit I'm not that big of a fan of stuff such as "water sports" but if you keep it to a "minimum" I'll be fine uwu"... The only thing that is a real No-no for me would be scat... If that comes to the front sorry I'm out xD
Anyway, hope you keep on working on this :3
OK, this was a good start, pretty smexy stuff here please keep going :3
I particularly like that it seems you'll have no problem getting your characters on both the giving and receiving end, wich I appreciate since most Futanari stuff I've read just focus on the Futa being always on the giving part... I'll wait for the next one :)
What worked?
The entire daughter+mom+mom section was right up my alley, basically
No so into the eventual futa x male stuff but hope to see more of the other matches
Pretty good start. The incest was sexy. I prefer futa without balls and generally to have pussys as well, but I'll stick with this for now.