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for Happy birthday Joma part 2

by Fanfictionfan360

schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the present, m8. You always know just what to

give. Well, with the help of a certain little minx 

Already can’t wait for next year!

Joma 

schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh my Arceus. Where to even start?

Well first, getting his three favorite sluts in there was a great touch. The only problem was poor loppuny got shafted. She didn’t even get to mega evolve. Maybe a story about her being the center focus is needed ;-3

Second, I loved the outfit for Gale, and the fact that she considers the club home enough to fuck in it. Which leads to the line about her being Jomas property. PLEEEEEEEASE expand on that. She is his, and he needs to collar her. He needs to take her up on the offer to fuck whenever when she’s in the middle of an important phone call.  PLEEEEEASE go into more detail on that 

But this was a perfect birthday story for him, and I know both of us will enjoy it for a long time to come. 

Skitty