Good start, would like to read more. Vivenne and Cassandra need to be used...
interesting , more chapters please
I always want Dragon Age hentai. If he is a mage at coircle tower he could start off doing Wynne. Then when the Warden visits, Leliana and Morrigan.
Or if you prefer DA2 setting, maybe he is a mage in Kirkwall who takes advantage of Meredeth, then Isabela and Merill. Hope to read it some day, big fan
Seems like a good start. a little simple, but who doesn't enjoy a simple OC/Mind control story. It's like the junk food of erotica. Hopefully, the actual chapters will be longer. I would like to see more.
Just a point to add you might consider, midn control is only really interesting with Sera in this scenario given her sexuality, sex with any other female will just feel consensual regardless. So either just do Sera or have the girls be resistant.
Pander to the non-con crowd or to the straight-turning crowd.
Good to read from you again, hope to see full chap. I'm always down for some Dragon Age. Would like to see Wynne taken (she never gets enough love), Morrigan is always fun (would like to see her shapechange to a male beast that mounts Leliana). Desire demons have a great character design. Hope to read some of that.