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person Blue
schedule December 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM

The fucking moment I read Nibbles on there I felt sheer horror. Nibbles was the name of the damn Rowlet in my Ultra Sun Nuzlocke. Jesus fucking Christ

person Daaaaaamn, this is good
schedule January 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Just so you now - I actually created an account just to tell you how much I love this😂😂 congrats on the idea anyways, waiting for updates

h3Xar

schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the story. I haven't played Sun and Moon yet so I need to do so. Things are hot and I hope Althea finds some interesting pokemon.

person Anonymous
schedule January 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Interesting story so far.  Is it possible to have a 'bad end' chapter based off of chapter 10?

person Anonymous
schedule December 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just have one question: Are/How are you going to do Bad Ends?

schedule November 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is awesome. I get excited every time a new chapter comes out. Can’t wait to see where the series goes

person Gui
schedule November 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So, her Father is actually Meowth, Pokemon pregnancy are actually quite common and she might just end up giving her soon to be made sibling a playmate. Cool story. Don't forget to make some (could have happened) bad endings.

person Anon
schedule November 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great writing, keep it up! Very interesting concept.

person Nitters
schedule November 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very well-written intro, and an exciting premise! I'm super stoked to see where this goes.