rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story. The writing isn't crappy, it is a little choppy in places - best thing is to leave it a month and then re-read for anything that sticks out at you.

As a pure PWP sleep fet fic though, it works just great. Something to be proud of. I don't have time to read many stories now, but I am glad I read this one.

Very hot, I also found her armpit hair very sexy, wish you had spent more time with that and describing the hair between her legs.  Writing needs some work but I'm sure you will improve.  Would enjoy more of this story or something similar.

Olga... got that name just turns me off. xD Nice fic though.