The fuck man?! How could you go post this shit! Sonia cheating is one thing, since people pair Sonia and Solo, but Hope?! Geo's MOTHER?! That's bullshit! One time sex is enough to break her will? Like hell it would be!
Holy shit! I didn't even know there'd be a fic about Solo. And a harem one at that.
I played Starforce, but he never struck as the harem type. But that was a really hot lemon.
Another good chapter. Less grammar mistakes this time, and the shower scene especially was great.
The story is solid - but there's a few obvious problems that I can pick out. Numerous run out sentences, strange words that shouldn't be there, and a lack of description in certain areas. Other than that, it's pretty good.
If you want to discuss this a bit further, hit me on up my email. I can help you out a bit more if you'd like. Email : bige2955@gmail.com