I'm surprised that this hasn't been more popular with how well written a story it is. The narrative and the build-up are the best things about it for me, I would say. You certainly know how to get the reader invested, and I feel that as I'm reading you've really put thought into the beginning- the journey- and end. Not that it's over yet, but it seems that way for me reading it. I may re-read it once it's over. Very good story.
Clever, some fun bits. Most liked seeing her raped by the miners. Carver episode was getting good but ended too soon. She should be seriously raped and fisted by Meredith. Even in canon she was shown to be a rapist. Keep going.
I'm a longtime reader and a first-time reviewer to your stories
This is my favorites since your Metroid story. You are amazing at showing the psychological breaking of characters. I also love the confusion and dream-like atmosphere of each nightmare. You're doing a fantastic job.
I have one request. Obviously you're the writer and have no obligation to do it, but I haven't seen a good orgasm denial story since, well, your Metroid one. I saw a trace of it in this chapter and was hoping you'd do more. You're superb at them.
Thank you!
Excellent story, sir. I commend you for updating it so frequently. However, was it really necessary to throw shade at other authors (in your endnotes of Chapter 17) by saying that their stories are "collecting dust." Does this mean that you are going to start churning out Mass Effect and Resident Evil stories by the dozens every week? If so, I shall devour them voraciously...
Love the series and how it builds slowly and relentlessly, looking forward to new chapters!