Oh man that size difference~
Don't worry, Shauna. I'm sure every Nurse Joy and Officer Jenny felt the way you did at first~
A very good chapter, but every time a character talks you should leave a space, for example.
"Do you like me" Shauna asked.
"I like you so much" Brook replied.
And the physical description of the characters is missing and the description of the clothes must be more detailed (length, color, sleeve length etc ...
To be honest I was never a fan of Pokémon bats Ruby and Sapphire, but this story was really hot ;-3
IBTS
Wasn't much of a fan of this one
sorry :/
Well, I definitely enjoyed that ;) Loved seeing that slut get fucked and used. Keep up the good work!