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That was reallly good. I'll strive to write as great as you one day. I'm especially fond of the way you made the Gallians look all evil and just the detail you put into the word choice of this story. Also now that you mentioned it, it's true that no one has really made time to put a Selvaria focused story up on this site. Good job, you made the fans happy.

Good stuff, though too much focus on nastiness and debasement befor ethe sex.  Hope to read more.  Gen Damon should force her to have sex with his horse.  Or pregnancy would also be good.