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March 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that CoC still has fans who are rooting for it! Starting off with something sexual was a nice intro given as CoC a sex-heavy game, and I find myself somewhat glad to see there are three protagonists as opposed to just one. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing that breaks the rythmn, and has a nice flow.
I was hoping to revisit Mareth again, but I'll reserve opinion on your setting until I read more.
Overall, a nice start and it seems you have some sort of direction you want to take the plot it, so I'm looking forward to reading more. Please continue!