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for Vault 69

by sandman-nobody

schedule May 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm actually enjoying this story, I was pleasantly surprised to find a half decent plot surrounding what amounts to a cunt of the week story.

Good use of the fallout lore.

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Your story made me want to create an account just to review it, no other story here has caught my attention, you write well, keep things going on a smooth pace, and I am eager to see what happens next, hopefully more confidence :D

schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I wonder who Tomas will have on his dick next? This story is great at portraying Vault 69 and just how much stigma a man would get in an all female environment. I think it would be anxiety inducing to say the least.

-GB

schedule April 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good to see chap4, could have used some more editing for spelling but well written.  Disappointed we only had one brief sex scene, I think you did enough plot and set-up early on.

Speaking of plot, their `carrot' is a good thought but there are real problems with implementation.  Even assuming they can keep their stud from being harassed constantly for sex, what if 50 or more women end up pregnant at once?  It could happen and it would be a real dent in their work-force.  Anyway, hopefully we'll focus on the sex and not get caught up in worker revolts, etc.  Hope to read more soon.

person Fapman
schedule March 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic! I cant wait for you to take this further. There are many interesting possibilities, and I cant wait to read what you will do with them

person Biggie
schedule March 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

By far one of the best fanfictionselection I've read, please continue you left off right when it was picking up speed....but again great job

schedule March 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please update this story! I love it and willing want the kid to fuck his mom and the Asian doctor bad! Also the leader Mable and the blonde soldier woman, should be hot! Keep up the good work!

person Enigma
schedule February 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Damn that was hot. Please update this. 

person ilego123
schedule February 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks you for writing this story please continue

schedule February 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A very good set up with some very nice sex. There are a lot of things you can do so make sure it does not turn out too monotonous and keep things changing.