Wow that was a very good chapter I went I thinking ok another sex scene and it was but more importantly the character building and the discussion between them two was well put so while I am totally behind the male (the female side has good points too) Nevertheless as he said nothing excuses what the female did to her daughter so he has ever right to do what he promised or was asked to do by her.
I don’t know if you have done this already? I also apologize for weirdness of question but is it possible for u to not just do sex scenes with old people the first 6-7 chapters were all old people it seemed? (To clarify I am Not asking for anyone Under 18 I am assuming he is at least that so between 18 - 20 is what I meant) I am asking since you said in chapter 6 I think? that you would reply.
I haven’t read chapter 10 yet but I hated the cliffhanger on chapter 9 and you skipped what happened next and went straight to morning in chapter 10
I apologize for last 2 reviews especially last one
I'm just curious. Is it safe to say that this story and indeed ALL stories from this author are abandoned? I ask because there has been NO update since March. The updates were becoming more infrequent though even before then. I do love the stories, but either the author can't logon to this site, the author has given up on writing, the author hs been entirely too busy to write even a paragraph saying they are too busy, or the author has left the mortal realm.
One of the greatest stories on the internet, most likely. I hope he doesn't skip out on either the story and non-intimate parts, nor the dirty sexual parts.
Just the right amount of character, chapter length, depth and sex to be one of the greatest fanfiction stories ever concieved.
Please do continue this story!
Chap 11. Not very sexy.
As for Maria, she is a well written character. I have a good sense of her self and morality, as reprehensible as I find her. Im sure many wealthy people feel that way. However while everyone wants wealth and ease, there is more to life. Love and family. I would like to think that many of the women are not just doing this for the perks but so that life will continue for their civilization. Because if they dont do this then everything will end. Also, many years from now, they will need children to look after them. And hopefully many of them will love these children, teach them and be fullfilled by those relationships. Maybe someone should point that out to Thomas.
Of course I prefer a lot of male dominancce in my fics so I'm all for him becoming more of an alpha. For me he's been much to passive and bidable during all this so I hope he takes charge.
Well-written, though I prefer `I hate my job' that is an awesome Mass Effect fic. I want to read more of that.
I absolutely love this story, and your excellent writing style. Please continue this whenever you can :)
Nice to take a slower pace with a character who would of course NEED a slower pace (a virgin). I can only hope there may be a bit of fluff eventually with Tomas/Camille.
Chap8, glad to hear about the faster schedule. I hope it works out but I would never rag on you for not keeping it. That's not cool.
This chap was too much talky-talky for me. Hope for more hot sex it future installments. Good luck.