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by Fenris30

person MkSlave
schedule March 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm in complete shock that nobody else has reviewed this story. I know this sounds like a strange thing to read in a fanfiction review, but this was a true masterpiece. I've never played KOF, but your description of the characters' personalities and traits made me feel like I knew them. The relationship was amazingly developed, and the sex scenes were hot but strangely intimate. You explored the characters without making them go OOC (at least from what I understand.) I know I sound like I'm gushing, but I haven't read something this good in a long time. Bravo!