I really like the story and Miranda as a sub. Hope you write many more parts.
I normally tend to ignore stories that have dialogue written similar to a script to a play or movie, as it feels disjointed to me most of the time. I also tend to be annoyed when I read stories where it's uncertain if English is the native language of the writer. I'm all for people learning languages and practicing writing, I just don't care for it when I'm looking for wanking material. Those stories, whether or not they cover my preferred fetishes, I usually skip. So I would normally skip this story entirely.
That being said, I look forward to every update to this, and it is easily one of my favorite stories I've come across on the site. I don't know what it is exactly about it, but there's something that draws me in despite my usual pickiness. I won't say it's for everybody, but I would definitely suggest that people don't just skip it, as they may be pleasantly surprised like I was.
Really good, looking forward to the next installment