Best story
Loved every last bit of this!
Are you ever gonna do ana, pharah or zarya?
cause i cant wait
You take no prisoners, do you? Brilliantly disgusting, practically sick to my stomach while reading and yet I kept on till the end. You do this writing thing pretty well if I do say so myself.
I swear I love your vocabulary! What a great story and I cant wait to read more!
Read through this thinking 'there's no way it can get any more brutal', and it just continued delivering. I mean, most of what took place here isn't really to my taste but it was just written so damn well I kept on going all the way to the end. Vividly descriptive almost feels like an understatement; I think you probably managed to include every word in the dictionary along the way. Kudos to you, you've got a talent for smutty storytelling that's for sure.
My god. I didn't realize that such a horrid situation could sound so filthy and eloquent at the same time.