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for Federation Farce

by salarta

person DrkVrtx
schedule August 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

>Save Zero Suit modifications, y/n?

If it means more smuggling of booty with that booty, definitely yes.

schedule August 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow salarta, you are sooo pissed.  I really preferred your earlier, less sardonic stuff.  This isn't even sexy.  Writing as protest not really gonna accomplish anything.  Go back to stuff you like.

schedule June 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is a beautiful criticism of the way Nintendo is treating Samus right now; they made a mistake with Other M, I think, and are doubling down on it, tripling down on it, assassinating one of the best characters in gaming... it's frustrating to see, but fantastic inspiration for works like this one. 

Your take on the character of Samus is spot on, I think, and I love the way she is aware of what's been done to her and her struggle to try and fight it. I love her small success followed by the forced unconscious responses of her body, love the namelessness of the Federation troopers that have taken her. 

Her mind being intact gives Samus a terrible sense of helplessness, where she has to fight to do anything - to speak her mind or move without some pre-programmed response taking over, and I love that you've worked the character redesign from the latest Super Smash Bros. into your work. 

Simply awesome. I hope there's more - I want to see where this story goes, what these troopers have in store for their mascot/pet/plaything, and how she copes and tries to escape from what's been done to her. 

person Anonymous
schedule June 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Praise Sakamoto, for he has tamed the mighty hunter and decreed that never again shall Samus Aran proudly roam the stars in search of answers and adventure. Instead, chibi mechs will suffice.
person Anonymous
schedule June 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great storie dude  i love went humiliation is a focus point on erotic stories .
is there going to be a sequel ?
good job