Chapter reads like my dream job. So yeah... they are assholes.
AWESOME CHAPTER! CHRIST THEY HAD IT GOOD! WHAT AN AMAZING EMPLOYER!
ever been to a strip. club? ONLY THEY GOT TO GRAB HER BODY!?
WHAT UNGREATFULL SCUM! CASTRATION IS TOO GOOD!
Yeah they're assholes but Lara deserves what's coming to her. She's a bitch getting a taste of her own medicine, and I bet her sick bored rich ass cunt loves getting off on all of this (whether she's the one doing it or it's being done to her). People calling for castration are way off course and obviously want a good erotic story ruined by vile, immature, and completely out of place gore. How about you get a little kick in the balls every time you check out a VERY scantily clad woman? Seems fair if we go by your logic.
Gotta say, I enjoy Seductress Lara much more than Victim Lara, always have. So I do hope you write more chapters that feature more of the former and less of the latter.
she deserves to be robbed blind and have her freedom and ability to act on her own impulses taken from her by two guys who are her employees just because shes hot?
by YOUR logic any woman who is hot... deserves to be raped.
THEY CHOSE TO STAY. KNOWING she did this. ONLY To control her as their sex slave... no other reason.
Why, if they only. see her. asan object of sexual gratification, would. they complain about her bikini? You're everywhere in regards to A,Z.
They are assholes. PERIOD!
She is PAYING THEM. AND knowing she gets them off, is dressing in ways they like envission her in. Her dress during her assignment proves it.
if gore is an issue...
Chemical castration. They get to have the equipment, just never get to use it. NO MORE BLUE. BALLING!
Problem solved.
Oh my god you white knights are hilarious. None of you got what I said and none of you understand your own hypocrisy, why bother. Friendzoned much? I bet.
Speaking for myself... friendzoned? NOPE. Had everyone I ever wanted. BUT seeing as you are AGRESSIVELY defending guys who resorted to robbery and brainwashing instead of skills... AND are being so harsh to their victim?
I DON'T BET...
I KNOW.
Yep, you got me. I'm the good friend that occasionally rapes you. A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do, I say. But..'had everyone I wanted'...that is so something a friendzoned loser would say when challenged. It's like the virgin that immediately gives the exact number of women he's slept with so far (oh yeah, 56 AND counting!). Cool story. But what does any of that have to do with the two assholes and their prized bitch BoobsWriter so eloquently describes in his story?
Listen up white knight faggots, the bitch got what she deserved. Nobody's cutting off her labia and clit or physically mutilating her in any way, so why would A&Z deserve such treatment? She's getting raped and robbed, the equivalent would be them getting raped and fired without a penny to their name, no? That is, if Lara is NOT enjoying all of this in the first place. Shit still remains to be seen. And all you dimwitted hypoctites, aren't Lara's actions in the prequel sexual harassment? Wasn't she the FIRST to objectify and harrass her own employees (that she already has tremendous power over)? If you answered no, well nice double standard assholes. Like I said, if you are dead set on castration for A&Z, consider offering up your crotch area for a free kick to EVERY woman you happen to ogle and objectify with your 'male gaze'.
are you guys for real? this board is FULL OF RAPE, TORTURE, DEATH, SNUFF of tomb raider fictions everwhere and you complain about mind control? :D
SERIOUSLY?
LOL