I need more. Lara is such a sexy cocktease.
awesome descriptions
dont know why people are so butthurt about this
author is great with words and the overall plot seems more reasonable and grounded than most tomb raider fictions on this board
"Alister dry-swallowed. His mouth was like the Sahara desert. His cock was like the Tower of London."
Good to have you back, was beginning to think we'd seen the last of you. Thankfully that's not the case, and the quoted passage is one of numerous examples of why I enjoy this story. Definitely think these 'missing' chapters are a good and probably needed way to provide more context to the overal dynamic between Lara and the boys, though given what she did to Alister I really can't think of how Lara can possibly make the tease worse for Zip. Either way I'm looking forward to you flexing your descriptive writing muscle in that regard. Top notch stuff.
Well, so the castration-fetishists are back...
Anyway, that was a masterfully written chapter. Lara was a cruel tease and reading about it was torturous, but in a good way. You really have a way with words. Looking forward to any new "Missing Parts" as well as a continuation of the main story!
How about this, a nod to 'Lara's Shadow' dlc from 'Underworld': to prevent being castrated by the wiz kid, A. orders Lara to revert back to her old self, and NEVER obey him, or anyone she doesn't want to.
She kicks ass, then gives A,Z a choice: get turned into her mind controlled sex slaves, or get their asses kicked daily.
Just an idea.
Absolutely loved the teasing! I love when women, especially Lara, uses their sexuality and body like that. Can't wait to see what she has in store for Zip!
Will we see more from the 'current time', what happened after she lost consciousness under Rachel's ass?
they robbed her blind they chose to stay... so er... hell yes... they loose they loose their nuts.
Have to go with last guy.... they stayed to trap her, not teach her a lesson. THEY are Scum.
GREAT WRITING THOUGH!
as ever
Someone needs to stop repeating themselves. But that said... perhapse castration is too much?