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LMAO XD

OH GOD! I'm sorry, I can't stop laughing. This is just fucking hilarious! 

No insults here, I swear. 

It's just... Felicia gets a note that basically says, "Hey, I'm Corrin's mother, you don't me personally, but I saw you and a vision, and you have to turn Corrin into a sex maniac, and make him have a harem."

That part just makes me laugh so much. 

I seriously laughing from this.

But you know, I much prefer this than the bullshit that the terrible story of Fates pulled. I'm okay with making Corrin a sex maniac and controlling all the girls into his personal cockslaves as he goes along the war. 

Also, to be honest, despite how Robin is bred with Grima's blood, Corrin being a literal offspring of a dragon would probably make his instincts and lustful desires to be much stronger in my belief. It's a direct thing, rather than the blood case.

But I am looking forward to this. This won't have much NTR, but that's okay. And I like how you handled Felicia, even showing some clumsiness with sex. 

Fantastic first chapter! I was pleasantly surprised to see something for Fates in here and you did not disappoint in the slightest, your writing is quite remarkable in detail and tone. Felicia especially felt right out of the game, and I can see your Corrin matching up as well. I'm most interested in how this will proceed and what Mikoto will continue to observe and keep to herself heheh, and I wonder how much of the rest of the castle heard Felicia and Corrin's union? They weren't exactly keeping quiet in there! I'll be looking forward to more as you can supply it.

A very solid start to what will hopefully be a very porny fic! Banging all the women for peace is amusing, lol. Corrin is indeed quite different from Robin, but still rather...well, Corrin-y. You said you wanted pairing suggestions; in that case, tbh, I'd rather see him end up with Azura in the end than Felicia.

Oh god no. The English-dubbed names, and no progress on the other story at all... Not to mention no way of contacting you on AFF at all, whatsoever.

Glad you are working Change of Tactics first. It will give you a chance to get a better chance to get a grasp on the charecters here. That being said, if this is half as good as CIT, we are in for a treat.

Well, this was not the update I was expecting. At any rate, what starts this is kinda more awkward than your other story, especially wehn even Felicia and Corrin wonder how the hell 'Peace' and 'Conquering girls' are related. But still, even if Felicia does not become the one to ultimately wed Corrin, there is very little doubt she'll remain close to him until death do them apart. As for Flora... Well, given the lack of subtlety from Corrin and Felicia, I imagine we will see those stages or at least something close to it. 1. What happened between you two? 2. Felicia, what have you done?! 3. Gods, why did you do this?! 4. (Learn about letter). What? How are those two related?! And after that, well... possible resignation that there is no turning back from this now. How willing she is to join in, who know, but she'll surely add in knowledge Felicia would forget in her passion. And I imagine Lilith would be third?