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Sam... or Himiko.

Seriously? THAT is how you choose to deal with James? One shot and it's over? No revelation of how corrupted and foul he was to the world, no lingering public humiliation for him as a form of justice? Just one lightning bolt and that's it?

Very well writen; but I have to agree with the last reviewer. The cops showing up would do more to hurt all involved. Lara Croft alive and well, and in bondage; with all gloating conspiritors. Here James died in victory.

Well written; hard to read something so depressing.

Now I'm interested in spinoffs of the other "animals" or more backstory to them in this universe.

I recognise that reference... Steph was referenced in the first trailer when we see a strung up body Lara recognises in a cave at the start of the game, but they cut it out for the release. Ironically, for this story Lara actually saved Steph's life by refusing to let her come along. I wonder when Sam/Himiko will reappear... and if it'll somehow change Duchess' situation.

Stephs in trouble.

Lol do I see cameos from Marvel and Capcom in there? Do I see two cameos from your other "Masque'd" fic? That's quite a line up for the race you have there, which begs the question: when are the other race "entries" going to get their origin stories here in Hunterverse, eh?

Chapter 13 was fantastic. Obviously Lara's not going to be serving out the full 10 years but so far she's spent upwards of 2 years in Parmistan. A good span of time for near permanent mental trauma. I really dug the day to day details, as usual, and how little she reacted to James, showing just how broken she was. Of particular interest is how the youngsters of Parmistan treat the "animals", how openly hedonistic they are. A suggested edit would be regarding the details of the new plug in her front. I'm reading the plugs themselves are shaped like Bacchus and Poena, but wasn't entirely clear if the vaginal Bacchus plug also had hair on it, if it was separate from the pony tail plug, or how it's being held in (mechanical or by muscles alone). It would be particularly interesting if Lara came into contact with other "service animals". I recall James seeing one during his initial visits to Parmistan, bu thusfar Lara hasn't had any interactions with ones such as herself, although I assumed that was because she was still in training. She should race another such as herself, and if she loses (whether fairly or due to deliberate handicap), it might make for good detail.

I dislike "bad end" and "revenge rape" stories. This is turning into one of the worse examples of both. The villain of the story is apparently flawless, his plans work perfectly, and he suffers no setbacks. He needs a setback. Estates have existing trustees. English law does not recognize legal documents signed under duress. All existing trustee has to do to overturn power of attorney is prove Lara is being held in degrading conditions. Videos leak. Pictures get taken.