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December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Huh.
I am extremely intrigued on where you are taking this.
I like how there is a plot and a bunch of subplots at the same time, that is well done.
As for pairings...
I would love to see one with Kellam, but I can't seem to find him around here anywhere.
Good luck!
I am extremely intrigued on where you are taking this.
I like how there is a plot and a bunch of subplots at the same time, that is well done.
As for pairings...
I would love to see one with Kellam, but I can't seem to find him around here anywhere.
Good luck!
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November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. The setup for the sex is the usual contrived aphrodisiac infection, but you have enough character development that the sex seems to matter, and the scenes are highly inventive. Take more care with the proofreading, though. My favorite bit was Henry's innocently showing off his erection; that really made me laugh.
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November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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