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November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and think how it's written is very well done though to be a bit confusing when it come to the monsters in a way. Anyways I like the double view of each path and how drastically different they are from each other.
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November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I personally liked the way you handled this chapter. I know that it would be more work for you, but I kind of hope you write all other confrontation chapters like this. Which ever version you chose though, I can only say this. Stay Determined!
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October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Probably liked the pacifist version the most but enjoyed the impregnation part of the no mercy version(if the normal game's evil mode could be called "genocide mode" this is more "repopulation mode" :P).
I'm guessing from the cherry question that the no mercy version will have quite a few taken from monsters? :)
I'm guessing from the cherry question that the no mercy version will have quite a few taken from monsters? :)
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October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the pacifist better but I really like that both are endings are here, though for final boss stuff, you might epwant three chapters for that.
Anyway, I noticed this:
"You encouraged Rana by telling her that, as long as she believed in herself, all of her *hopes and dreams* would come true
OST reference much? I can't blame you it's gooooooooooooooooooooooood.
Can't wait for the next one!
Anyway, I noticed this:
"You encouraged Rana by telling her that, as long as she believed in herself, all of her *hopes and dreams* would come true
OST reference much? I can't blame you it's gooooooooooooooooooooooood.
Can't wait for the next one!
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm amazed that you can turn this story into smut and at the same time, keep the original tone in tact. I do hope you continue this story, I find it incredibly interesting and, not to mention, erotic.
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October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was great. Definitely looking forward to more.
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think that the froggit should be raped in return.
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think, in order to please both crowds, you should show both of the options.
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A. Cool, you are writing the undertale with save jokes.
B. Spare the froggitt, I like pacifism
C. Are you gonna update mushroom story soon?
D. NYEH HEH HEH
B. Spare the froggitt, I like pacifism
C. Are you gonna update mushroom story soon?
D. NYEH HEH HEH
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October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! Which ending(s) do you plan on writing out? I quite liked this chapter and eagerly await more.