rate_review Reviews

I gotta say guys, this is bar none the best chapter of the story, and surprisingly, not for the sex scenes. You have grasped what so many others in diverging path story lines seem to miss. Despite how different they become, the main character is supposed to be the same person. Video games especially seem to have a dog kicking maniac and a mother Teresa caricature just happen to share the same name and narrative starting point. To be completely honest, this was the first chapter in which the pacifist path really engaged me, as the smut is is the main reason I visit this site. The accidental consumption of Toriel by the legitimately good heart Frisk was a real "pay attention" moment for me. But the best part is the No Mercy Frisks (initial) decision to spare her out of a possible compassion, that sets this story head and shoulders above any duel path, moral choice interactive story that I can think of. For it to really seem as if it is the same character through both story's they must constantly have, however minor, temptations or impulses towards an option usually taken by their mirror. It does not need to be frequent, in fact I would think if out of character if No Mercy Frisk had more than two or three moments like that in the entire story's run. The best part of the pacifist path by contrast was the twin realizations of accidentally committing a great injustice towards one he greatly carried about, albeit without knowing what the full consequences of his actions would be, and the apparently very strong impulse towards continuing with her enslavement, an act that showed astoundingly human characterization. Both his realization of his moral compromise and it's consequences, and the proof that he is still a version of the No Mercy Frisk, and vise-versa. I can not think of another moral choice story that does this, making your writing exceptional. Please continue no matter what, and my personal thanks for the No Mercy Frisk/Flowery Scene, absolutely a favorite scene for this story. As an idea towards the issue of Chara that i raised in previous reviews, and the fact that I like Sexy plant Flowery vs another goat Asriel, I wonder if it is possible in the no mercy end, after the barrier is broken or bypassed of course, for Frisk to evolve to a perfected, soulless existence? Him and flowery, free to have infinite experiences in the multi-verse, hopefully with a real knife between Chara's eyes. Also hoping that the lack of comment at finding the toy knife is indicative of Chara being at least not in direct control of Frisk? I really hope so. Fun to speculate on, and I sincerely hope to see you continue the story to that point. You have clearly demonstrated that you handle it with exceptional regard towards character dynamics and as compelling a narrative as the original. We are almost to the Sans meeting! Keep it up, I am filled with Determination for you to succeed!

OH GOD... THEY DONT HAVE SOCKS!!!! THE WORLD IS ENDING!!! Anyway as always keep it up! See you in the land of the pun-master.

Wonderful as always, No Mercy for the win. I hope you temporally separate Frisk from his girls for the Sans introduction. Sans is awesome and deserves lots of screen time, in both paths. For the No Mercy path, have you thought of preliminary Flowery sex encounters? If Frisk has awesome non rape sex with her and does not immediately tame her, it would be interesting to see him become more obsessed with her, and could lead to an interesting end game. Thanks for writing, and good luck!

Love that we get both runs. Love the enslavement.
hot as fuck
still wanna see him enslave Toriel eventually.

how will fem-sans handle the merciless rapist?
Will rapist-Frisky facefuck flowey rather than kill them?
All that and more in the next episode

First doing this from my phone so sorry for any typos. This is a freaking gem. Im intensely curious about where your taking the story and love the attention to the material. I know there is a long road ahead for writing, especially with 2 routes, but don't give up!! You've made something really good her. This is BEFORE i bring up the sex. Whew man is it hot and heavy. Can be a little too short at times but honestly this is one of my very VERY few repeat stories. Please keep them coming because each chapter..
Fills me with determination!!

This is one of the funniest stories I've read on this site. Personally, I find the No Mercy version hotter, but enjoy the Pacifist version more as a story.

Absolutely exceptional. Well written, paced and atmospheric, this feels like how the game would have been if it was an H-Game. I prefer the no mercy path, but hope you will do something about all the monsters following him, to prevent it from becoming cluttered. Perhaps some fore of hyperspace soul storage weapon? A permanent well of LOVE to draw from and a separate dimension to keep his conquests and ofspring? The only thing I hope you do in the no mercy path is to make sure Chara does not win. I played Genocide to fight Sans, and the ending where I tried to keep my soul completely undermined the play through for me. Chara needs to be stabbed with a real knife. As an aside I think Flowery/No mercy Frisk would be a good pairing, but any interaction will surely be hilarious. Thank you for writing and good luck continuing!

Toriel should be next

But what will Catty be called?
...On the letter from the shop.
Is it a Perfect set up for a joke?

evil version is better