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October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting so far. When is the next chapter?
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June 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ah, should be interesting with the Captain coming back around...
Can't wait to see how you write Lucina and Bayonetta.
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February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is great stuff. Glad to see Palutena joining the fun and hope to see the other Smash ladies soon.
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December 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I'm rooting for Samus and Wii Fit together, but most importantly I hope that Wii Fit never pairs up with any dudes moving forward
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November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this but had to comment on this latest chapter (6).
The whole cotton candy experience was awesome. And I can't wait for the Jigglypants to be put into action.
Just hope Samus isn't too done with this place.
The three of them Wii Samus and Jiggy could take their show on the road but I'd miss Peach.
Ok, four of them. More Peach please too!
The whole cotton candy experience was awesome. And I can't wait for the Jigglypants to be put into action.
Just hope Samus isn't too done with this place.
The three of them Wii Samus and Jiggy could take their show on the road but I'd miss Peach.
Ok, four of them. More Peach please too!
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November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A story of this quality seems to be a rare discovery nowadays, and a story of this quality with an author who is dedicated is even more rare. Although slightly disjointed on a few occasions, this has been a wonderful read thus far. Kudos to the author! Eager to see what the future holds.
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October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You frequently use this annoying technique where you have something happen and then describe it to us through reactions or otherwuse two paragraphs later (Samus blowing Wolf is a weak but passable example). Then we have to go back and re-read the previous paragraphs while accounting for this just so that we can get a good understanding of what's going on, and it's necessary because I have no idea why. It's very jarring and takes us out of the story.
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October 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best written and most entertaining story I've read in a VERY long time! I am greatly enjoying it so far. Looking forward to future chapters, keep up the great work!
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October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ike: he fights for his friends.
8/8 gr8 m3m3 m8
Shulk is really feeling it ;)
...even though he has a girlfriend and is pretty much married...
WHATEVER.
Keep doing what you're doing!
8/8 gr8 m3m3 m8
Shulk is really feeling it ;)
...even though he has a girlfriend and is pretty much married...
WHATEVER.
Keep doing what you're doing!
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October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely one of the best I've read here in a while. Hope you keep this going.