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for A Second Chance

by FantasyWriter1

person eshan
schedule October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this and looking forward to the next update.
person Lee
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can you please keep writing The Boss Rewritten and Candi? I don't want those stories to be abandoned. If you have writers block on them, that's fine.
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff. I agree, it would be great to see Ivy with the Jarl the next time she's in Whiterun. Maybe even a threesome with the two of them and Irileth? Would be very handy, making a Jarl into one of your pets hehe.
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Loved Ivy flirting with Carlotta, and the way you write action scenes is very enjoyable.
person Vos
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just became my new favorite story! Love the character of Ivy!
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter! Too bad Balgruff didn't give her a different kind of 'reward', but I'm looking forward to Ivy 'teaching' Lydia.
Can't wait for more!
schedule October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful concept for a story! I've always been a fan of Ivy's. It's probably the whip, or the accent, or everything else. I really enjoyed how you kept Ivy in character, kind, but confident, badass and in complete control of her sexuality. It's gonna be really fun reading about her dominating Skyrim.

Only real fault so far, the first chapter could use reformatting. Some of the lines have no spacing.

Is Ivy gonna become the Dragonborn, btw?
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really not into scat, but I like where this is going.
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward for more!

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