rate_review Reviews

I really like how this story is coming along. Braith is an interesting take on game's blank slate protagonist, and I think you have a good grasp of Aloth, as well. The start feels a little bit rough to me, but I think that's just how these things go sometimes. By chapter 5 or so I think you really find your voice. You have a good attention to detail this world alive and the scene in chapter 8 is the hottest yet.

To new readers: If the first chapter doesn't grab you, I would highly recommend giving it until chapter 5 or so. They are all short chapters so far. They get better as you go and the sex picks up pretty quick.