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For some reason, I feel like once it's Anna's turn, she's really gonna turn things around into a prostitution sort of thing. I can't imagine her NOT wanting some money after Robin thoroughly wrecks her insides out.

Also, are you including Spotpass DLC Aversa? Cause I can imagine pseudo-sibling sex to be HOT. Especially if 'older sister' Aversa plays out things with 'younger brother' Robin.

I don't mind these kinds of chapters, since they're necessary for further develop characters. Good to see that we're finally getting going with the meat of things, and I'm especially curious as to what happened with Lissa.

Beena while since last update... Dunno if I should get worried.

Apart from that, got an idea for Olivia you may like. I know Cedricus posted one, but it felt incomplete to me. She could see Robin about dancing... But instead, why not as to help her shyness? If she's embarrassed to do certain dances in public... Why not suggest doing even more embarrassing dances for someone in private? If she can get over her shame doing so, then surely she'll be able to do something easier for her, no?

Or at least, that could be logic Robin would use for her to get started.

Funny how I posted just before you updated. And hey, work is work. RL will always take priority.

Also, poor Lucina. The knife is being twisted and it won't be pretty when she'll learn the truth.

As far as Olivia go, it was just a logical deduction. Would she ever do a suggestive (and possibly outright erotic later on) dance on her own? Not really. But with the suggested setup, then she can be convinced into doing so.

Reading Cedricus's idea for Cynthia's father, I have no idea why he would even suggest such an event for Sumia. As far as I see her however, she's not going to be someone Robin will conquer early, given she's Lucina's sister. But manipulating her should not be that hard... And later on, sister threesome?

As for Cherche... Robin will need to placate Minerva. Somehow. And now I have this funny idea in my head about Minerva being the one convincing Cherche to help (in a scenario when Robin told her his problem and she hasn't said yes yet), sensing what Robin has inside and going 'Obviously superior mate'.

I like howitzer wasn't Robin first time cheating on Lucina with Tharja. It really shows that you thought this storyline through and didn't just because pick Tharja because, duh, it's Tharja.

Awwww, Tharja actually lost her virginity to her crush!

It actually just struck me that most of the girls that haven't had sex yet, aside from the mages and some others, probably lost their hymens riding their horses or pegasi during the war or before it while training. Cynthia might still have hers if riding a pegasus up in the sky isn't as rough as riding a horse at full speed on the ground.

I somewhat wish there was a FEA online generator for making the portraits of custom Robins and the Second Generation children(since they have different hair colors depending on their fathers)so when characters are first introduced they could have a picture link as part of their description to make it easier for readers to "see" them in the story.

Surprising that Robin didn't do more with her breasts here... And I'm going to guess Tharja's idea of getting Noire ready will be hexes.

Your previous comment on Nowi and Nah got me thinking, making me wonder how that would ever happen given how rational Nah is... Until I realized Nowi may also be one of the few that got what is going on with Robin. And then using logic on Nah turning her own rationality against her.

It's going to be interesting at some point. Tharja right now knew what was going on, some others girls may be more willing if they also realised what is happening... But what happen once Robin's attention turn to people that have no idea and would never consider doing it with Robin? I believe that would be the next step into turning this darker.

This was a good length for a chapter; between this and the last one seem like an ideal page-count, since there's plenty of interesting story here. I'm looking forward to exactly how all this social engineering will be pulled off.

Well, you made me create an account exactly so that I could review this. Good work.

Anyway, this seems like a good intro so far. Having Robin stay in characterand still do it will be an interestign challenge too. But will you be able to write to the end is the question. After all, so many have good dieas but give up later on.

As far as requests go... Well, I know one guy made a whole list of scenarios and such so it's a bit hard to add more to it right now. And I'm a big believer of plans having to change depending on circumstances.

But I must say, as far as Morgan go... given whose daughter she is, I cannot see her taking forever before she start noticing some things. And given how devoted she is to him... Well, I'm sure it's not hard to imagine a scenario that has Robin both glad for such and still hate himself more.

Suggestions you say? Let's see what crazy and not so crazy things I can come up with. These suggestions unless it's actually said "Oh, Cordelia is the child of Sumia and X" doesn't really affect pairings and can be changed if adapted to suit the story's needs. This is just spur of the moment ideas based around the females of the game that you don't need to follow at all in any way(btw, Lucina's mother should be the village maiden just so more army pairings are open and Robin doesn't need to feel guilty about maybe sleeping with his best friends wife):

Lucina: Already done in story this far and I like that she's sort of alright with an open relationship if it helps Robin.

Tharja: On the way so I won't say much but I would like it if she got some use out of her knockers, if she kept fucking Robin after he falls asleep after running out of energy and if Noire actually turns out to be Robin's unknown daughter created from this encounter(really, the game way to get the children after 2 characters marry should probably be ignored and just have some couples with children, some children that showed up before their mothers got married or had sex and one or two children that are from different couples than the ones that exist in the "present" since they showed up from different alternate timelines).

Anna: She seems like she would be alright with fucking Robin for a high payment so clearly Robin needs to go the extra mile and get her to the point that she doesn't care about the payment halfway through and just wants more. Feels like someone who would enjoy anal but has never done it before but would be willing to sell her virgin arse for a high enough bid.

Morgan: Daughter/mother threesome, Duh. Could have her know many positions due to reading their version of the Kama Sutra(Hubba's Book Of Tactics?)but have no experience herself. A gentle first time about showing what people who love each other can do together. Unless you're planning on a complete harem ending you could have her go off and suck of Owain and/or the other Second Generation kids to test her new knowledge after finishing with dad(could even have her do someone like Chrom if she ends up with a Old Man kink).

Naga: Should probably get either one of the last chapters or a chapter with the other three dragon connected girls. One of Robin's "Oh, Naga!" should be met by a "Oh, Robin!" before the story's end.

Raimi: If you feel the need to have a quick fuck for Robin to fill out time between "conquest". She's one of the few surviving allied characters that never shows up again in the main game so you could just say she was part of the army after their battle but never got attention from a main character before now.

Robin: A one off crazy encounter in the Gate with a female version of yourself should always be met with the thought "Does she want to fuck as much as I do?".

Cynthia: Sort of dark but I would want to see a Cynthia that was made when Sumia ended up raped by the bandit Ruger(off screen of course and she escaped quickly)just so his claim of being Cynthia's father is actually correct without him or her knowing. Robin should ride her hard, pull on her pigtails, call her his Pega-Pony Heroine(or just his own Pegasus Pony) and she should end the scene with a fist pump for a job well done. Could go sleep with Owain later since they're the Justice Cabal.

Lissa: Would find it funny if at some point in the story Lissa ends up having to sit in Robin's lap during dinner due to there not being enough seats and he simply enters her during the meal and she has to hide the fact with her dress.

Sully: Could challenge Robin to a game of some kind. If she wins he has to buy her a horse while if he wins she will owe of him a favor to be cashed in. She will of course never give up and will lose a bunch of games before she wins one instead of giving up after the first lost round(be it due to Robin letting her, growing too distracted or simply her becoming better). Sully will owe Robin quite a few favors after she gets her horse.

Miriel: She needs a sample to try to fix everything. Robin can't really stop after just giving a cup of his stuff and Miriel has to observe his condition closely.

Sumia: Robin could happen to find her while she's busy playing with herself while reading a book(maybe in a stall in the stables?) and not noticing she has been found out until she's already squirting into the air. Robin could offer his help in her recreating the next scene from her book, be it the sacking of a town by bandits, a Lord coming home to his wife or maybe the trashy porn parody of Awakening that just came out and she got the first copy off without telling anyone.

Maribelle: Could figure out Robin slept with her darling Lissa despite being married to Lucina and confront him and/or her/them about it. Should be shown that she isn't above everyone else by ending up with her arse in the air and her pigtails coming undone and getting dirty from all the pulling and using them as handlebars. If she starts swearing and making grammatical mistakes all the better.

Panne: Should be all for repopulating her warren with more taguel than just Yarne. Her husband should be ashamed for not helping her as much as he could. Could have Robin become the Alpha of her and her new warren despite not knowing it.

Cordelia: Clearly needs to have a chapter at some point with her daughter where they end up comparing their knockers and wants Robin to decide which are the best.

Nowi: All dragongirls chapter!

Olivia: Could come asking Robin for books that detail different dances. A while later she comes back and want to test some of them before showing her husband, Inigo and the rest of the gang since he's so helpful and the only one she can trust to not laugh if she makes a mistake. Pole and lap dancing are real dances, right?

Cherche: The back! That magnificent back needs to be adored or scratched to the point she has to hide it after for awhile.

Say'ri: Since she can't marry anyone she's free game. Could even have her simply be angry that Robins slept with all other princesses but ignored her. Could do something with her sarashi/breast bindings.

Flavia: Time for Robin to be dominated by someone who doesn't care what he thinks or want to do and who is far older and more experienced than him!

Tiki: Another member of the all dragongirls team up.

Emmeryn: Should either be healed or made 100% clear that she's onboard with everything. Consent is important here.

Aversa: Happy to help Robin and Lucina.

Kjelle: Could have her lose to Robin in a fight and then ambush him in the showers/river since he's worthy of her time.

Severa: Play up the tsundere trait and her really long pigtails and you're on for a wild ride.

Noire: Could have her come upon her mother and Robin after one of her curses starts acting up and pay special attention to the largest knockers in the whole world. Her curse could be anything from a sudden dry throat, an itch that needs scratching, her going into heat and her womb going into ovulation overdrive, her breasts starting to lactate or just a sudden cold.

Nah: Yet another part of the dragongirls team. The one most responsible and clear headed.

Special bonus characters: Look, you can't grind in the Outrealm and not happen to run into some Deadlords.

Exciting to see what YOUR ideas, pairings and general story is going to be in all the future chapters!