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Now this is the sort of manipulation that I've been waiting to see, and with someone he did not have any previous sexual experience with. I wonder how future plans will get, and how more complex they will be.

Looking foward to science.

Was gonna comment on how good he story is, but reading the other comments and how long some of them are just made me feel inferior as a reviewer.
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Well, I could not find a PM feature... But I'm here to show I still support you even after almost another month. Dunno if you need the motivation, but there you go.

Hi all,

I don't know if there's a way to send individual PM's on this site, and I don't want to be the kind'a guy who updates a chapter that's just a status update.

But I did want to let everyone know, hopefully enough will see this, that I haven't abondoned this and the next chapter is en route. It's just a case of work's been keeping me absolutely swamped, between travel and training I haven't had a chance to touch my computer at all recently. Things are cooling down a bit more now and I should have some more time to start writing towards the end of this week, I wish I could tell you that I'll have the next chapter out soon after that, but unfortunately I haven't gotten much past the initial framework for it, so it may still be a while coming.

Sorry about that, but I do think this next chapter should be a lot of fun, hopefully I can get it to you as soon as possible.

-J

Well, a month now... I still hold the hope it's just RL delaying this.

Might want to go over the chapter one more time(noticed a few misspellings you might want to fix and a few spaces that are missing).

I actually went and re-read Gaius and Maribelle's support to remind myself how they get together in the normal game. Strangely enough her father is mentioned in that one too.

The age of the royal siblings always interested me because IIRC Emm became queen really young at 9 and had the throne until she "died" at 24 or 25. IIRC Emm is supposed to be 6 years older than Chrom and Lissa is 4 years younger than her older brother.

Hype for the shy dancer!



(つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ FNATIC TAKE MY ENERGY! ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ)

>I have literally zero sad Lucina scenes planned

I'm preeeeeeeetty sure the reveal is going to hurt her at first. She cannot possibly take that well.

Apart from that, great chapter. But I am hoping you don't have 'had sex with her before' flashbacks planned for every character. Tharja was a surprise and Lissa was unexpected yet understandable once we read how it happened, but it will get strange if you keep pulling it.

Apart from that, great chapter. But Robin need to gather the courage to tell Lissa what is going on with himself as well now. Not like he could have told her that first with that backstory... But I doubt he'll find that easy either.

And now next, Olivia. That will be fun to read.

I was curious to see what would happen when it came to possible pre-existing relationships for the other girls, so this adds a complex layer to the story.

Awww, Morgan is so adorable and nice! Did notice she went against what her father told her and asked her mother about when she was going to marry Robin which might come back to bite her.

I feel bad for Lucina...

Robin seems to love the large tracts of land Tharja gave him. Will be interesting to see what other parts he enjoys with everyone else~

@Mega: I tried to come up with the most fucked up thing I could think of based on in-game events for some on my list and Cynthia's map had her confused about who her father was so I went with her actually being right as a cruel bit of irony. In hindsight it doesn't fit with the fic's world at all so I would replace it with whatever(Justice Club shenanigans maybe?) if I could edit my old review.

(Btw, there is a spot or two where Lucina's name is misspelled)