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MUCH REJOICING!

*Holding up change of tactics #1 fan sign and chanting* Tiki Tiki Tiki Tiki Tiki Other than that, um... Another great chapter, not a huge fan of Mirel, but I am really happy at how fast this one got uploaded. If this is the new norm, I don't think anyone would complain. (You know my stance on Cynthia, I have made that abundantly clear.) What about Sumia though? I would think that would be a multiple chapter build-up like Cynthia because it is his best friend's wife, but I am honestly curious to see how that would go down. Anyway, I think I have come to realize one of the reasons why I love this story so much, and I thought I would share. With so many other lemons it seems like there is no character to the characters-- as if they were blow up dolls merely there for our faps. Any lemon fanfiction with characters it seems like every time they are OOC rather than actual extensions of the characters in question. Not so with yours. It seems like these charecters are so close to the original source material that it seems like one of the original creators wrote this! Especially your work with Robin. Tldr: My vote Tiki, is Sumia going to be a thing, keep up the good work.

The pain of being a cuckold... didn't see that coming. Technically speaking, it's not really NTR, since Robin's the one doing the stealing, not being stolen from. I wonder if Robin is going to actually steal Sumia from Chrom. The thought's so hilarious I actually want it to happen (And considering Chrom does it in Awakening if you're not careful...). It'd also make the dynamic between them and Lucina veeery interesting. I love how lengthy each chapter is, even if it means a longer wait between updates. I'm already awaiting the next... Tiki's definitely my favorite of the dragons.

Another great chapter! I really like your characterisation of everybody because I can see them acting as such if pushed to that point. I can't wait for the next chapter

Well, that was... Huh... Well, different is the word for sure. Still, damn... I feel the right pic would be that guy staring down at the table with a drink nearby, probably thinking what the heck just happened and how. And what he should be feeling. Only with those two, I swear... Now when did you get the idea of taking two of the strangest socially to run that? So, Nowi featured next, huh... Now how does one tame someone as wild as her?

Quick review about two points in your newest chapter. I'll just come out and say it: Cordelia is, by far, my least favorite character in the entire Fire Emblem series (for personal reasons I won't bore you with). I bring that up, however, because I am actually looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with her. I was just going to skip her chapter and sub-sequentially any scenes with her, but I have to admit you've picked my interest. I might actually be looking forward to it. Not only that, but the "backstory" you gave her with Ricken was actually an interesting decision. Not only does it help further the plot but it actually made me feel, dare I say it, bad for Cordelia; and this is a character I would always ax off after getting Severa just out of spite. So good job with that. That being said, now I get to what I believe is the main problem with this chapter: the lesbian scene. Technically speaking you did set up for this in the previous chapters, so it's not like it came out of nowhere. Yet it feels out of place to say the least; like you just slapped it on to have a lesbian scene because, well it's a lesbian scene and people love those. Personally I think that Lissa's growing "lesbianism" if you would is a unnecessary side story that derails the main story more than helps it. And I know that there is a good chance that you have a plan for that scene and the lesbian plot line in general; maybe you're setting up a threesome with Maribelle , or maybe it's something else. I just think it's unnecessary; but feel free to take my opinion with a grain of salt. That's all I have. I do look forward for the next chapter and any more in the future; that is until you make a Morgan chapter.

I have been checking this every FUCKING day for you. This story is that good. Anyway, still need that Cynthia. Glad you are going to have something great planned for her but... you don't understand... I NEED it. Once again this storry is the coolest. You are the coolest.

This story is amazing. I thought the Maibelle/Lissa scene was grea as well, was sad when it was just a dream XD. Hope to see next chapter as soon as you can.

Forgot to mention: Can the Lissa Maribelle thing not happen in a dream? Can it happen for real in this? Please?

Once again you've taken a well-used setup and put a creative, thoughtful spin on it. Bravo. I enjoyed Robin planning by the seat of his pants as much as I've enjoyed his slow scheming of chapters past. And the Maribelle/Lissa scene was delightful. I was actually disappointed that it was a dream.