Really enjoying this story. Especially since my internet was limited after Hurricane Irma.
I was honestly not expecting how well written and fleshed out you treated Awakening characters.
I am curious how you will treat Tiki. If she'll have a flashback to the events of FE: Shadow Dragon where she meets Marth after he rescues her from Gharnef's mind control and how she assisted him in defeating Grust, Macedon, and finally Dolhr.
Anyway, hope the next chapter comes out soon. You earned yourself a regular reader.
Amazing at always, glad to see it's back, love Lissa is getting a bit of a sidestory and that she's getting close to Tharja which is fast becoming my favourite pairing! Keep it up !
Well....shit. Nice to see that Robin's going to have to struggle, though for some reason I think Panne won't oust him. Call it a hunch.
That aside, nice to see lots of development for other characters. Miriel was a treat, and it was rather shocking to see Lissa kiss her long-time friend Maribelle. And now that Cynthia's realizing that she might have feelings for Robin, Noire's shown that she's always loved him. Ahh, inter-family conflicts!
Pretty good story, slow to start but understandable. Good plot, nice smut kinda hoping for more combinations after having been spoilt by the Lissa/Tharja scenes but I hold out hope that Robin does he thing.
Always nice to see this story update! The bit with Robin and Lucina after the roleplay was the sweetest ever. It looks like the Robin/Cordelia/Severa is going to be interesting. A few questions if you don't mind.
1. The summary lists this as Robin/All Female. Does that include Naga and Morgan? Hopeing to see both of them later.
2. What are Robin's stats and stat caps? It would be nice to know just how strong he has become.
3. Will Robin eventually do anything "godlike"? Naga has time mastery, and Grima was making infinite Risen, so will Robin get anything? A transformation, or that "Mark of Robin" possibility that Thraja mentioned, possibily immortality for him and his women? If he keeps the raise dead power that grima had that would be a cool way for Emmeryn and Aversa to come back to the story.
All is idle speculation. Loving the story, and can't wait to see it play out. Stay Determined!
Hey,
I just wanted to write a review to tell you that this is the best erotic fiction I've ever read from any medium, and also one of the best Fire Emblem fanfictions of any genre. Honestly, I can't even come up with any sort of constructive criticism. The characters and plot are simply better than canon.
Anyways, thanks for writing this and hope you keep doing so!
(Attempt to review a change in tactics chapter 13: take 3)
So let me just start with the obvious.
Obligitory Cynthia chapter request.
Anyway... So... The whole "Cordelia" thing was super hot, and I really enjoyed it. I think my eyes just about bugged out of my head because of this new dynamic. Then this very enjoyable segment of just Noire and Severa talking. I love these. These little snippets of character building are what make you the best. Then... another Nowi scene. I mean... I knew that it was a thing that was going to happen but... If I seem hesitant it is because I don't want you to take my opinion on Nowi as criticism against your writing (which I would honestly pay for, but I get for free so awesome.) My issue is that whenever the word Nowi is read, I read little girl. There isn't anything I can do to change that, and it is entirely my hang up, not yours. The Nowi portions, despite being uncomfortable for me, are very well written and I am sure others enjoy them and find the things I enjoy (The mental manipulation mainly. And of course Cynthia.) uncomfortable. Honestly, in my opinion, you could not be doing better.
And despite myself I find myself looking forward to Panne's chapter. I always found Panne dull, but I am confident you will do something special with it.
sincerly, your biggest fan
P.S. Maybe not your biggest, but a big one. Hell, I typed this review out three times because you deserve feedback.
Well, that part with Lucina certainly spiced things up, huh? And oh boy, Tharja had to endure it all. Makes me wonder how she'll escalate after this.
And oh man Robin, do you realize what you have done to poor Nah? Now how will she ever be able to forget that smell? Hell, if she ask her mother about it... Oh God, Nowi would tell her to go for him regardless of circumstances, huh?
And speaking of Nowi, she sure seems to enjoy her time with him, huh. Makes me wonder if Robin will train Nah a bit likee that... With a shade of difference that she would know what he'll do and submit her wilder side to him anyway with an eager smile.
Great chapter all around. But now I'm guessing Cordelia is really next... Oh boy, her mood will be in the gutter after the date Severa mentionned, huh? That's why you have that poll on FF going, huh?
Loving this story. Well done harem fics are very rare, and this is one of the best i have ever seen. Please don't abandon this! Here is hopeing for Anna's chapter soon. Would it be possible to later include Apothesis Anna? I can understand not wanting to do all outrealm characters, but the infinite goddess vs/xxx the undead dragonslayer seem like a good pairing too me. That said, i am looking forward the most to the Morgan chapter, with the Morgan/Lucina chapter the close second. No hurry though. The quality of your writing is exceptional, and both of those women deserve nothing but you best. Good Luck!
Another great chapter. I was actually happy to see Nowi and have no problem with her and wish there could have been more. Hope to see the next chapter soon