I've been with this story ever since the very beginning, and I've always liked how well written everything is as the writer has a clear love for the game. However, with the last chapter or so, I think I may personally have to put it down. Each chapter, to me, has become more or less the same thing, over and over and over, and Robin has easily become an unlikeable character. The premise, or "reason" he was using for sleeping around, has been tossed to the wayside, and more or less just used as an excuse to continue things. The plot has become so one dimensional that I highly doubt any surprises or twists and turns, could really spice things up.
I am by no means saying this is a bad series. It's not. But for me, it lost its luster ages ago. But keep on writing, clearly a lot of people still enjoy it!
It's amusing to see Sumia's hidden depths, she's more than the pie lady. But things are certainly getting difficult on top of Hard.
And Chrom better hope no one finds out about his screw up.
In short:
That's pretty good
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and another chapter for my favourite story, Picking up some traction I see. Patiently awaiting chapter 18 no matter the wait.
Looks like things are really heating up, wonder what's the cause (his activities especially in this chapter, that envoy hinted at a while back or some other problem)
As for Morgan, the difference in figures isn't surprising considering how Lucina's mother and sister are both stacked.
And I wonder how much things will build up before Lucina finds out.