loved it
Well, I truly have enjoyed this story. It's a much more adult take on the KotOR game and it's a lot more realistic in that sense. As dark as I may sound whilst saying this, it is not surprising that Brejik would use Bastila as his personal sex slave. It's nt far from the possible truth, seeing how beautiful she was and that she was completely unable to help herself and nobody would be willing to help her.
I also really like how you've taken on the relationship between Carth and Rinna; once again, very adult and realistic compared to the game. I could definitely see some things happening between the two of them, seeing as they were consenting adults in the game. Although Carth was loyal to his wife, I doubt he could go for five years without satisfying his more carnal needs.
All-in-all, very well done! I'm excited to see where you go with all this!