Sex was nice and hot; loved Joey and Lyra going at it.
-Ace
The sex was hot and fuck in this Chapter; absolutely love how much of a slut Lyra is.
-Ace
I love that skull fucking, Adam. I can see why ita one of your favourite kinks. Lyra is such a massive slut :)
-Ace
The sex was hot as fuck :) Nice to see Lyra getting fucked and treated like the slutty girl she is.
-Ace
The sex was so hot in this first Chapter of Impure SoulSilver; I just love how much of a slut Lyra is. She kinda reminds me of...well, me ;)
-Ace
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