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hey I have some ideas 

for this story, if you want hear them?

can i  be in the story

Nice! I started reading this and I almost thought it might have been Vanitas talking to him, but with it being Roxas it changed the whole equation. Very delicious, I'd like to see more sometime soon. (though I'm being a bit of a hypocrite because I need to pump out more chapters of my stories <.<) Stil I admire the way you express things betweeen them.