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for Indoctrination

by Raptor_hQ

schedule February 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hi do you do commissions?

person Sharpe
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Can't wait for the next characters.
The only problem I can find is that the chapters... are more or less all the same.
person Cedricus
schedule December 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I kinda hope Liara ends up embracing eternity with whatever fucks her so she gets pregnant with a Reaper Asari baby.
person JayDee
schedule July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first chapter. I liked it! The whole transformation while fucking thing especially appealed to me, with the cyborg side taking over.

I really must play Mass Effect some day.
person Fapman
schedule June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's a very nice idea you got going with this story, but you need some diversity. Every chapter it roughly follows the same plot just with a new girl
person Metal Izanagi
schedule June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just read the Traynor chapter, and it was amazing. It's refreshing to see a darker fate shown for the women of ME, in contrast to the pairings/happy endings that a lot of other folks write. A few minor grammar mistakes and typos, but it doesn't change that your work is...enjoyable? Not sure if that's the proper word, but hopefully you take this as the positive review that it is, and continue to share your writing talent with others.
person Izanagi
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing work, so far. I'd love to see your take on how Samantha Traynor might get what she needs from a bunch of Husks.
schedule May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love all the chapters so far. Seems like Shepard's getting a little low on friends, though!
schedule May 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the stories!

I can't wait till Shepard gets hers.
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a fantastic, darkly sexy premise, and two of my favourite ME girls already covered. I'd love to see Ashley in a potential third chapter.