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April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I noticed M!Hawke/Fenris doesn't seem to get as much love here as F!Hawke/Fenris does, so I thought I'd drop you a review to hopefully encourage you to continue this/write more stories like this.
The smut was fabulous, A++. Hot, detailed, and in-character (especially Fen); just what I've been looking for. Hawke's concern for Fen's comfort was also appreciated 'cuz it gave me some warm fuzzies in my gut--you made it feel like he genuinely cares about Fen instead of going for the typical gay fanfic archetype where top!Hawke's just like "I'm gonna stick it up your butt and you're gonna cum without me touching you" deal. You even taught me a few words I hadn't seen before, like "prurient." I'll have to remember that for future use.
I'd love to read more of your M!Hawke/Fenris smut, especially if you write something with top!Fenris. Or just more of Hawke enthusiastically sucking off Fen. I can't get enough of that.
The smut was fabulous, A++. Hot, detailed, and in-character (especially Fen); just what I've been looking for. Hawke's concern for Fen's comfort was also appreciated 'cuz it gave me some warm fuzzies in my gut--you made it feel like he genuinely cares about Fen instead of going for the typical gay fanfic archetype where top!Hawke's just like "I'm gonna stick it up your butt and you're gonna cum without me touching you" deal. You even taught me a few words I hadn't seen before, like "prurient." I'll have to remember that for future use.
I'd love to read more of your M!Hawke/Fenris smut, especially if you write something with top!Fenris. Or just more of Hawke enthusiastically sucking off Fen. I can't get enough of that.