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Tough call but I'm gonna have to go with Bombette since she's quite the bombshell (pun intended). Although I don't want to see Luigi stranded in the dungeon for the rest of the story. Maybe he could be freed along with the rest of the Bob-ombs after the Koopa Sisters defeat?

This story is truly amazing I'll would give it a 5 star for 1 of if not the best mario story evey.
I also like the bad ending on what would happen if mario did not all way win.
And for chapter 13 I think I choose bombette for mario needs more power in the group I'm sorry luigi I like you a lot but i think a guy starving and got cot petty easy probale wan't be much help.
But if you want the story to be more funny and have some awesome mario & luigi moment i say go for it.

P.S thanks for choosing koopie.

Another great chapter, good take on the Fuzzies. I vote koopie because goommaria is already an outgoing character and I think we need to balance it out.

I really love this story and for chapter 11 i choose koopie. Also sorry this review is so short.

It's really great that you are doing multiple endings. Lets you explore more possibilities.

First of all let me say I love the concept of this story and can't wait to see what you have in store. I'd have to go with Goommaria as Mario's first partner since she seems more reliable and a greater help on Mario's quest. Also I was wondering would you be alright including a few characters from other Mario RPGs in your story?

I've been waiting for a story like this ever since I saw that mario thread at the mgu forums. You may want to also post it there because more people would be interested in it. As for the choice at the end, I'd probably be happy with either, but for the sake of the story I would say Goommaria. I feel like the other 3 would be better suited to an alternate bad end where they trick him once he picks them.