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for Mushroom Story

by Latham02

person Dan
schedule January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make another chapter of this amazing novel
person Dan
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Once again a superb chapter
person That other guy
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"Rock hard rocks?" Mario said confusedly. "Isn't that a little redundant?"
How to sum up a chapter in a line XD.
Great work as always.
Can't wait to see more of this, and undertale, in the future.
person That other guy
schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think I like what you are going to do with parakarry already :D
Great chapter, keep up the good work!!
person Dan
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice sat-up chapter it is very detail about what going to happen with mario and friends. Also love that jr appear in this chapter.
person Emily
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you aren't leaving Peach out of the action. Keep up the good work!
person Emily
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was simply fantastic! You certainly have a knack for writing lemon scenes. I hope you plan on including a couple more smut heavy chapters into this story.
person Ves
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good to know that at least Luigi will be having a decent time in recovery! Been loving the writing so far, please do keep it up! Hitting all the right buttons for me.
person Dan
schedule July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Once again another great chapter also love the double bad ending nice going there.
person That other guy
schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one here who wants to see Luigi join the crew?
He kinda deserves it, he hasn't been with Mario in any of the RPGs...
If Luigi doesn't win, could he appear later for something, or at least get freed sometime...he needs the spaghetti...
Keep up the great writing!!!!