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for Nymph's Delight

by ShireFolk

person MrRigger
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Much better second chapter than the first. After reading that, now I want to find out who Pence finds next.
person MrRigger
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but there was too much going on, not enough focus on anything. Still enjoyable, but not quite up to I Love Chess or Indecent World Tour.