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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You got to continue the story. I want to know what happens next.
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April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this has some real potential, and your writong is good and logical too. I'm hoping for more soon!
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April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys, thank you for all the encouragement! I just have to be in the right mood to write it, and real life has been REAL as I'm due to give birth this month (Hooray preggo hormones, amirite?) and super busy at work. My brain is dead when I get home, lol! I plan to return to this, I have ideas, just have not had the time/energy. Please forgive me if it takes a while! :) We gotta get this girl to the college, after all. Good shit happens in college. ;)
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January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I like Mona's conflicting feelings on the situation. I look forward to the next chapter.
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December 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really, really hot! I eagerly await next chapter!
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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hope it's not too depressing to get a second review from the same person, but I thought parts 2 and 3 were pretty good too. Nice sex by the lake there.
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December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter - really hot concept and straight into some good sex. I for one would like to read more!