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November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Man, I can see Amanda walking through the rest of the game mostly untouched by the Xenos all the while her belly grows. Her journey would probably end with her as the center of a new nest on the Torrens after failing to escape the ship after being confronted by the Xenomorph and giving birth to her spawn while Captain Diane is impregnated in front of her and the newly born spawn starts to milk Amanda.
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March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The waiting game continues...
I think we can all agree; we're waiting for the next chapter(s)!
I think we can all agree; we're waiting for the next chapter(s)!
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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. A Two-Chapter treat!!! Love the Horror one. You really know how to build up Characters and Situations. Love it.
6. Chapters was interesting. Cuts and Blackouts and a crazy cliff hanger...The Wait was totally worth it!
6. Chapters was interesting. Cuts and Blackouts and a crazy cliff hanger...The Wait was totally worth it!
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January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You made a lot of readers happy with that last chapter, lol.
Keep it up, we all appreciate the great writing. Update ASAP!
Keep it up, we all appreciate the great writing. Update ASAP!
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January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a surprise! Two Chapters at once.
I don´t know how much you will do in future but I think you are one hell of a writer.
I was unsure about Amanda and the Alien and how you would do the actual encounter but it seems you actually did it.
Unbelievable well written Horror-Segment with the next Chapter having the Xenomorph in it.
A bit of a bummer was you "lack" of focus on A. Ripley´s Ass. I remember you having and special focus on it in the first Chapter. It came however a bit short in the fourth one.
No hard feelings just an observation. Nevertheless, this is one high quality written Fanfic.
I don´t know how much you will do in future but I think you are one hell of a writer.
I was unsure about Amanda and the Alien and how you would do the actual encounter but it seems you actually did it.
Unbelievable well written Horror-Segment with the next Chapter having the Xenomorph in it.
A bit of a bummer was you "lack" of focus on A. Ripley´s Ass. I remember you having and special focus on it in the first Chapter. It came however a bit short in the fourth one.
No hard feelings just an observation. Nevertheless, this is one high quality written Fanfic.
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January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok maybe I was wrong... Good addition.
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I knew this was going to end up being a tease
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January 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this going. We need more, more, more!
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December 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great second Chapter. I don´t know what your overall plan with Ridley is but I hope it wont be short of surprises.
I totally loved the part where fate or just the work of the Xenos on the station screwed Waits over...
PS: Give that Xeno some Ridley-love :P
I totally loved the part where fate or just the work of the Xenos on the station screwed Waits over...
PS: Give that Xeno some Ridley-love :P
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December 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This better not just end up being a tease